I was reading about six sentence stories. I had this stuck in my head, but it didn't work out well, run ons abound. But hopefully it will elicit a chuckle, anyway.
He saw her across the room, her hair a gorgeous, wavy red.
A vision of loveliness, she wore a fuzzy mohair sweater.
He glanced over the large-print book he was leafing through, stealing peeks at her, and wishing he was several years younger.
And bolder. And perhaps a bit more exciting than beige wallpaper in a beige room.
Then the nurse waved, and spoke up, "Sir, the optometrist will see you now..."
5 comments:
You seem to have the knack for entertaining 6 sentence stories. Very cute.
Had this in my head for a bit, wanted it out... :)
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I've heard of them, never tried though. So it's the last one for a zinger ...
Heeheehee! Well done!
You've packed a lot of imagery into a very short story. Nicely done.
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