Friday, March 11, 2016

Six sentence story...

I was reading about six sentence stories.  I had this stuck in my head, but it didn't work out well, run ons abound.  But hopefully it will elicit a chuckle, anyway.



He saw her across the room, her hair a gorgeous, wavy red.

A vision of loveliness, she wore a fuzzy mohair sweater.

He glanced over the large-print book he was leafing through, stealing peeks at her, and wishing he was several years younger.  

And bolder.  And perhaps a bit more exciting than beige wallpaper in a beige room.

Then the nurse waved, and spoke up, "Sir, the optometrist will see you now..."

5 comments:

  1. You seem to have the knack for entertaining 6 sentence stories. Very cute.

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  2. Had this in my head for a bit, wanted it out... :)
    Cat

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  3. I've heard of them, never tried though. So it's the last one for a zinger ...

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  4. Heeheehee! Well done!

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  5. You've packed a lot of imagery into a very short story. Nicely done.

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